Using Computer

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion families should let the youngest go first because the youngest has to get the newsletter. They have lots of trouble remembering it. For instance, they might leave it in their desk or their pencil case if they rolled it up. So they should have a reward. But if parents don’t like this everyone should have their own computer. It would be much better than how it is now. Either one of these ways would be very good.